Thursday, May 6, 2010

New Paper?

After that meeting with my instructor i went home and read the few pages of my draft that i had. I realized that everything i had written really didnt make any sence and i realy didn't like where it was going. So instead of trying to revise the hell out of it i just deleated the whole thing. I was really in the writing mood because that night i wrote about 6 pages on my new paper. I really refined my thesis and made the body of the paper much more clear and easier to follow. Now i incorperated alot more detail from the movie inorder to show how teens are portrayed in film. It seems like i just wrote a whole new paper compared to the old one!

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